Active Reading-Characters: Chapter Ten
Aureliano Segundo is a very sneaky man for he is sleepig with his brothers mistress and she doesn't know that that is him. He is like his grandfather spending hour sin that room, speaking to Melquiades and reading his books.
Ursula is fed up with the home and she wishes to be por again but for her unfortunate luck she has a statue at home that someone left during the war and it had money in it which she buries somewhere so no one will find it.
2 comments:
Keep up the great work, Aurora!
One suggestion: Please be aware of typos. You have several, and though I said this could be "informal," the writing must be understandable. You have words that run into one another, or spaces are in the wrong place (i.e. th eon). These mistakes are frequent and take away from the "thoroughness" of your work.
Your grade: B+
Hey Aurora,
Just wanted to let you know that all you do is creative and school appropriate. It's much appreciated.
Thanks for the concern!
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